aleng's journal

Hey there!! ...and welcome back to another post of Creepypasta, where I will try to destroy your childhoos or probably scare the heck out of you until you can't sleep at night.
Now before I begin, I'll show you a picture of a human form of We Bare Bears' bears
Now, you have a chance to either go find non-Creepypasta posts or continue. Enjoy! :D

PLOT
It was such a dark and drippy night. So dark, so blinding as the summer's sun rays. You can feel the rain drops dripping on your jacket, forming puddles on it. You are there for no purpose, no reason, but you keep walking through the hall of rocks and clay.

Then, you see a little light, like a candle lit or a star in the sky. It seems so perfect, too perfect to be natural. You walk towards it, but it doesn't seem to grow. As you get close, you feel a wall, a seemingly man-made wall. You notice a small hole, fit enough for your index finger. You see nothing but glows of yellow and gold.

As you get used to the brightness, you see four figures in the other room; three sitting and one standing. They look alike, with a little difference. Their skins are bleach as white paper, with almost unnoticeable eyes. They don't show any signs of genders and genitals, and there is something strange about each of them that differentiates them to one another.

One of the three sitting ones has needles in its eyes. The way it is stuck in their eyes, the eyes are forced to look up so the iris is only shown a little bit under the top eyelid.

Another one has needles in its ears. At some point, you noticed how long the needles were, much like the knitting needles but thin as a sewing needles.

The last one sitting has needles in its throat. But as you look, you noticed that no blood is flowing out of their skin, as if the wounds have healed and the needles have become a part of them.

The standing one, covered in needles, is awake and is staring at you, like the others. Although you can barely see their eyes, you can feel their staring gaze.

"Hello stranger" the needle-covered hummed. "I see you are there, so I must tell you a story"
"Story?" you ask.
"Feel free to sit and listen; take advantage of what I will never have again."
"Why?"
"I will tell you" the standing one looked at the other three "These are my siblings, we were all born at the same time at the same parents".
Introducing you to the one with needles on its ears "This is Hear. Hear was the first to come out of our mother's womb." Going to the next one, "This is Speak, the second child" The third "This is See, the third child" With a pause, the standing one stares at you in sadness and solemness, "I am Feel, the last child. Here is what happened and why we are like this"

"We were born by seemingly normal parents, until Hear was born. When Hear was born, they put needles in their ears, so they could hear no evil. But Hear cried louder than other babies, so they did none to us. Our parents say that many words are horrid and should never be heard by anyone, but at such a young age being able to hear is important for everyone, for a baby cries to get the attention of the parents, and thus if the baby cannot hear themselves they will cry louder because they do not believe the guardians can hear them"

"After some time, they censored our bodies so that they couldn't identify our sex, and also because they didn’t want us to see genitalia. They told us that we were blessed, for the human body is a scarring sight that no one should ever have to witness, and some witness it in their reflection at a young age. We did not and thus we were luckier than them"

"Then, they continue what they did to See, so See could not see evil, Noticing the mess they made, the decided not to continue it on Speak and I"

"When we were around six, Speak heard 'bad language' and could possibly spread it. So they put needles on Speak's throat, so they could not destroy my innocent mind by such words."

"Finally, I was bullied at school. No one believed what I told them about the thing my parents did to my siblings, since they always stay at home to keep them away from 'scums of society'"

"Since I got bullied, my parents didn't like me feeling the pain of 'evil', so they pierce me with every centimeter to numb me from future pain. At times, I wonder if all these horrid things they're trying to protect us from will be worth it in the end, because the pain, it hurts. It really, really hurts"

"Have you tried to escape?"

"Yes" as tears start streaming down "That's why I'm like this, I was trying to show my siblings the evil world"

"You have needles on your feet?"

Without saying much, Feel lifts up its foot, showing the butts of needles piercing the foot. Again, silently putting it down. “I am to stand here, to warn others of what to do to help their children and save them from the evil of the world that is so variable and uncontrolled. But do not heed their warnings, heed mine, and know what happens when you try to shelter your children this way.”

"Why don't you escape now?"

"I did, that's when mom and dad caught me. I don't want to anger them again"

"Are they still alive?"

"It doesn't matter. Now, go, before mommy and daddy get you too.”  

 You run back, getting more and more distant from the light. You think of whether you should help them or not, but you know that you couldn't do anything.

The darkness seemed so long, as if you were in an abyss. Your feet starts getting tired, but you still keep running, until your feet can't carry you anymore. Then your body starts giving up, and you're left there, as if paralyzed,but still with a sore feeling deep inside your muscles from the endless lifeless support it has had to bear. This is how you're going to die, alone, lost, silent. In those last moments, you wondered who will talk to those four innocent souls next, and if they will be more fortunate than you.

CRITICS!
I opened Creepypasta today (12 Nov 2015), and the first thing I saw was this. To be honest, the title "Innocent Souls" kinda reminded me of some horror movie. Now, the story, in my opinion, is amazing. The original one might be better, 'cause to be honest, I just made it shorter. Most of the dialogues are copy-pasted, and there's a reason why I love this story. It has that novel style in it, and not to mention, the composition of the story is really well written.
I'm guessing the story is about society being lost in the dark world (the cave) and not knowing the evil they're living in. After gaining such knowledge, one would surely try to leave this 'evil' world, but of course, the body will die while the soul is released from the individual's ignorance ("You are there for no purpose") after knowing such knowledge.
All in all, I love the concept of the story. Totally worth the read, plus, it's not as scary as you think... well, if you're being overly imaginative.
*evil laughs* >:D

I didn't expect my Creepypasta post would be the first to reach hundred views, so here's one of my personal favorite, and trust me when I say it's my favorite, you'll be paranoid whilst you're reading it.
..and here's a picture of a cute dog, y'know, just in case you change your mind before reading the whole thing.


 NOTE!
Main character is "I"






PLOT

The Rake

In the 2003s, a humanoid creature sparked the news media. Soon, in 2006, there are several documentaries dating from 12th century till present, spanning from 4 continents, and almost all are identical. I've been in contact with the member of the group and was able to get some excerpts from them.

A Suicide Note : 1964

"As I prepare to take my life. I think it's necessary for me to do this to end my pain, and it was all his fault. For once I woke up and felt his presence. And once I awoke to see his presence, and again to hear his voice and looked into his eyes. I can't sleep not knowing what might happen to me in my next sleep. I can't ever wake up. Goodbye"

 A Journal Entry (translated from Spanish): 1880

"I experience the greatest terror. I see his eyes when I close mine. They're hollow. Black. I will not sleep. His voice (unintelligible text)."

A Mariner's Log: 1691

"He came to me in my sleep. From the foot of my bed I felt a sensation. He took everything. We must return to England. We shall not return here again at the request of the Rake."

From a Witness: 2006

"About 4am, I woke to think that my husband got up to use the bathroom. I used the moment to steal the sheets, only to wake him up. I apologized and told him I thought he went out of bed.When he turned to face me, he gasped and pulled his feet up from the end of the bed so quickly his knee almost knocked me out of the bed. He then grabbed me and said nothing.

After adjusting to the dark, I saw the cause of his reaction. At the bed's foot, there was something sitting and facing away from us. It appeared to be a naked man, or a large hairless dog of a sort, with a disturbing and unnatural body position. As if it just got hit by a truck or something. My first thought was to help him, concerning to his condition.

My husband, on the other hand, is in fetal position, glancing at me occasionally before looking at the creature.

In a flurry motion, the creature crawled quickly in a flailing sort of motion right along the bed until it was less than a foot from my husband's face. It was completely silent for 30 seconds (or 5, it just seemed like a while) just looking at my husband. The creature then placed its hand on his knee and ran into the hallway, leading to the kids' rooms.I screamed and ran for the lightswitch, planning to stop him before he hurt my children. When I got to the hallway, the light from the bedroom was enough to see it crouching and hunched over about 20 feet away. He turned around and looked directly at me, covered in blood. I flipped the switch and saw my daughter Clara. 

She was very badly injured and spoke only once more in her short life. She said "he is the Rake". She didn't survive that night.

Police helped a lot, local newspaper took a lot of interest. However, the story was never published and local news never updated.

After several months staying at the hotel near my parent's house. We decided to go back home, and I decide to look for answers myself. We got a man who had the same experience and shared our experiences. He soon told us that 2 other people in NY who had seen the creature referred it as the Rake.

It took a lot of time to search through the small information on the Internet. Multiple people mentioned being spoken to, my daughter included. This led us to wonder if the Rake had visited any of us before our last encounter. 

I set up a digital recorder near my bed and left it running all night, for two weeks. I would tediously scan through the sounds of me rolling around in my bed each day when I woke up. By the end of the second week, I was quite used to the occasional sound of sleep while blurring through the recording at 8 times the normal speed.

On the first day of the third week, I thought I heard something different. What I found was a shrill voice. It was the Rake. I can't listen to it long enough to even begin to transcribe it. I haven't let anyone listen to it yet. All I know is that I've heard it before, and I now believe that it spoke when it was sitting in front of my husband. I don't remember hearing anything at the time, but for some reason, the voice on the recorder immediately brings me back to that moment.

The thoughts that must have gone through my daughter's head make me very upset.
I have not seen the Rake since he ruined my life, but I know that he has been in my room while I slept. I know and fear that one night I'll wake up to see him staring at me."

To read the full story, along with the videos provided, CLICK HERE

CRITICS
Yes, the story is pretty long, consisting of researches found by the main character itself, but what I really love about this story is its simplicity yet imaginative words, It didn't overly use "realistic" words, like bloodshot for instance, to describe the whole story. Truth be told, the first time I read it, I would constantly look behind to see if anything was behind me. I mean c'mon guys, imagine yourself sleeping soundly, only to be awaken by something that's so silent that made you think you're just dreaming, every night... and this thing prefers to kill its victim while they're sleeping.
Another thing is, I think that there's more than just one Rake, since multiple reports in different places are found. This made me think that the Rake could be real, but of course, I'm not gonna spoil it (You gotta read it yourselves).
Plus, this story is mostly copied from the original since I can't paraphrase most of its parts to maintain its creepiness. IF my summary didn't scare you, try reading the original, and the VID. This story deserves more recognition. It's one of those stories that makes you wanna stay awake to make sure the Rake isn't there to stare at you.
So, how was the story? How much would you rate it? 'Cause I'm definitely rating it 9.9/10 (nothing's perfect)

You probably heard these game series made by Scott Cawthon, the Five Nights At Freddy's (FNAF), which has been played by Pewdiepie, Markiplier, Smosh, and many more.
TBH, I'm not really a gamer, probably because I get bored with games easily, and I get grumpy if I lose to a single stage which kinda leads me to uninstalling the game, and hence, stopping me from continuing.

I never tried any horror games so far, except for Slenderman, in where I only get 3 pages and start getting grumpy (I hate you Slenderman) because I kept finding it difficult to get the fourth. Although I know games have to get harder as the player progress, but I'm not really the type to always agree on it, and when I'm in a bad mood, I eventually just rage quit.

My second horror game, FNAF2, was just something I wanna know what it feels like to play in real life. Normally, I would just watch people play, and you know you will get that tingling sensation inside of you in where you think "Oh, it isn't so hard. I can definitely play this!"
And it became your worst decision you've ever made in your whole life. Imma be real, I'm not scared of horror films, but when I watch others play horror games, I get freaked out. One probable reason would be that movies have set plotlines, and you can predict how the story goes. As for games, you make decisions, and wrong ones usually lead to loss, or in this case, jumpscare.

Believe it or not, I almost quitted FNAF2 when I started because I didn't understand how and why I lost, but it eventually got over and I won the first night which felt like I just arrived at Heaven with thousands of angels singing "Hallelujah", and puffy clouds surrounding me.

At this point, I kinda get the feels for how much effort Mark, Pewds, Jack, and other gaming Youtuber have made to give us some entertainment. Now I appreciate them even more. And some of you probably know that FNAFs has some secrets that reveals its unexplained background. Since I never played it that much, I watch Game Theorist who has been explaining it amazingly so far. He has made a LOT of effort on these videos
Of course, this is just an explanation for FNAF 1, the rest are in separate vids. To watch the others, you can just go to their YT channel or just click HERE! directly. BTW, they're making a movie based on this game series, just to inform. ENJOY!

Stephen King, known for his horror genre novels, and still lives up to its title. When I heard of him, I tried to read at least one of his works, "The Shining" (1970s).

The Shining by Stephen King

Yes, this is one of his famous works, and I have to say... I'm thrilled to read it, thrilled in terms of both happy and scared. But all in all, let's start it off with the plot summary..

PLOT
The Shining mainly takes place in the fictional Overlook Hotel, an isolated, haunted resort located in the Colorado Rockies. The history of the hotel, which is described in backstoryby several characters, includes the deaths of some of its guests and of former wintercaretaker Delbert Grady, who succumbed tocabin fever and killed his family and himself.

The plot centers on Jack Torrance, his wife Wendy, and their five-year-old son Danny, who move into the hotel after Jack accepts the position as winter caretaker. Jack is characterized as an aspiring writer and recovering alcoholic with anger issues troubled by past binges that, prior to the story, had caused him to accidentally break Danny's arm and lose his position as a teacher. Jack hopes that the seclusion at the hotel will help him reconnect with his family and give him the motivation needed to work on a play. Danny, unbeknownst to his parents, possesses telepathic abilities referred to as the "shining" that enable him to read minds and experience premonitions. Dick Hallorann, the chef of the Overlook, senses Danny's abilities and helps to explain them to him, giving Hallorann and Danny a special connection.

As the Torrances settle in at the Overlook, Danny sees frightening ghosts and visions. Although Danny is close to his parents, he does not tell either of them about his visions because he senses that the care-taking job is important to his father and the family's future. Wendy considers leaving Jack at the Overlook to finish the job on his own; Danny refuses, thinking his father will be happier if they stay. However, Danny soon realizes that his presence in the hotel makes the supernatural activity more powerful, turning echoes of past tragedies into dangerous threats. Apparitions take form, and the garden's topiary animals come to life.

The Overlook has difficulty possessing Danny, so it begins to possess Jack, frustrating his need and desire to work. Jack starts to develop cabin fever, and the sinister ghosts of the hotel gradually begin to overtake him, making him increasingly unstable. One day, after a fight with Wendy, Jack finds the hotel's bar fully stocked with alcohol despite being previously empty, and witnesses a party at which he meets the ghost of a bartender named Lloyd. As he gets drunk, the hotel urges Jack to kill his wife and son. He initially resists, but the increasing influence of the hotel proves too great. He becomes a monster under the control of the hotel, truly unable to control his dark side. Wendy and Danny get the better of Jack, locking him into the walk-in pantry, but the ghost of Delbert Grady releases him after he makes Jack promise to bring him Danny and to kill Wendy. Jack attacks Wendy with one of the hotel's roque mallets, but she escapes to the caretaker's suite and locks herself in the bathroom. Jack tries to break the door with the mallet, but she slashes his hand with a razor blade to slow him down.

Meanwhile, Dick Hallorann receives a psychic distress call from Danny while working at a winter resort in Florida. Hallorann rushes back to the Overlook, only to be attacked by the topiary animals and badly injured by Jack. As Jack pursues Danny through the Overlook, he briefly gains control of himself just long enough to tell Danny to run away, and that he loves him. The hotel takes control of Jack again, causing him to violently batter his own face and skull with the mallet so Danny can no longer recognize him, and Danny tells him that the unstable boiler in the basement is about to explode. Jack hurries down to relieve the pressure as Danny, Wendy, and Hallorann flee. Jack is too late; the boiler explodes and destroys the Overlook. Fighting off a last attempt by the hotel to possess him, Hallorann guides Danny and Wendy to safety.

The book's epilogue is set during the next summer. Hallorann, who has taken a chef's job at a resort in Maine, comforts Danny over the loss of his father.
(Source: Wikipedia)

CRITICS!
First off, not for the weak-hearted! Second, this really convinced me to read more of his works, but because I was busy with studies and took too much interest in music, I literally forgot and kind of stopped reading novels for some time. But anyways, back to the critics...
In terms of diction, King sure knows how to play common, simple words which gives deeper meaning than the usual ones, and this is one of the things that made me interested too read further.
Plot-based, this novel gives out curiosity to the readers, since it all started with Jack undergoing a chat (maybe interview) about becoming the winter caretaker. This opening makes the fellow readers feel like they're watching a movie, and the character development in the story is pretty well done, for a horror novel. Emotional-based, this is one amazing novel that is scarier than horror films. I won't recommend this to people who are imaginative and dislike horror. This novel really gives out the creepy atmosphere with descriptions of bloody flashbacks of "redrum" (read it backwards, you'll get "murder"), and of course, presence of supernatural beings. The ending, however, might either be 'forced' to be done or there is probably another episode to this book. I haven't done much reading nowadays, but once I get my hands in the probable next chapter, I'll share my thoughts on it. In the mean time, I'll focus more on Science. Anyhow, this is one 'killer' novel for horror lovers. Try reading it if you haven't!

Read the novel already? What were your opinions about it? Share your thoughts below!

Before I begin, those who aren't fan of horror, or are super imaginative, I suggest you not to read this, for this is one heck of a story that will make you wanna turn around to check if someone was behind you.

Horror, cute ain't it?

Ok, "Jeff the Killer", one of Creepypasta's best stories. In fact, I would say it is IN FACT the creepiest out of all. Although it doesn't contain any ghosts or scary monsters that you would usually expect in horror movies, this story still gives its readers a chill, and truth be told, I was scared of almost any suspicious looking thing I see for a few days after reading this story.

Horror and its contents

Some have claimed that Jeff the Killer was real, due to some video evidence and some stories, but I like to keep it as a story rather than a "criminal on the loose". Now the plot of the story was;

A boy named Jeff had a little brother named Liu (or was it Lui, I forgot), and Jeff always thought himself as a grown up, not needing to listen to his parents anymore. Time to time, he would feel a strange sensation that is somewhat pleasuring yet evil, but he ignored it, until one day, some bullies came over and tried to take he and his brother's money. The sensation grew so strong that he started going insane, hitting the bullies right in the stomach, stab the kid's hand (or elbow) with a knife. The police came after the incident, and Liu told them he was the one who stabbed them. This made Jeff's sensation even greater, and one day, when the neighbour asks Jeff's parents to come over for their son's birthday party, the bullies came back and tried to take revenge. Jeff was burnt and hospitalized as a result of the fight; on the other hand, his little brother was released after the police discovered that the bullies the one at fault. However, upon recovering, Jeff lost his sanity, and when he went home, he carved a smile on his face with a knife, burnt his eyelids, and in the end, killed his own parents and little brother.

This meme just explain my first time reading it

This story is so scary I wouldn't even recommend to simply anyone who shouldn't even try to. I can say this is one good story to scare people during Halloween, camping in the woods, or even a nightout. You could also use Jeff's model for Halloween (why am I suddenly bringing this up). Anyways, I could rate the story as 9.5/10. It was scary for a daily life-like story, because what usually scares people are stories of ghosts, dead people, and other mythical creatures. Of course, what I just posted was the plot, the real story is right HERE (CLICK HERE FOR FULL STORY), and for those who loves to read and HORROR, this is one perfect story for you to read.
Have you read about the story yet? What did you think about it?